Final draft

My worst day ever!

My presentation

W.A.L.T make improvements to my writing and present it to an audience.

It was a normal bright and sunny day in June 17.  I was just walking along the path looking for some food to eat by the lake. I’m going to eat some grass just on the path.

I saw some lions coming towards me ‘oh no’ where is my dad,  I was so horrified I was trying to sprint as quickly as I could away from the pride of lions.

‘Oh no’ they captured  me the pride of lions pull me into the water.  A crocodile came and they had a tug of war. They were pulling me everywhere, but finally they stopped and the lions won. They pulled very hard on me.

 

The lions were so happy, but not for long because the buffalos came back. The buffalos came and scared the lions away so I could be with my family again.

So now the battle has ended I feel so thrilled and relieved that I am back with my family again.

By Genica

My Turtle presentation

My presentation of Turtles

First Draft

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

First draft

The Worst day ever!

It was a normal bright and sunny day in June 17.  I was just walking along the path looking for some food to eat by the lake. I’m just going to eat some grass I am going to go to my dad he has big horns I am a calf with baby horns.  

I saw some lions coming towards me oh no where is my dad I am so scared  I was running away from them. ‘Oh no’ they caught  me the lions dragged me into the water. And the crocodile and the lion having a war.

So now the battle has ended I feel so excited that I am back with my family again.

Genica's Battle at Kruger Sequence

Animal war

	The Buffaloes are walking towards the hidden lions.
	The lions are looking at the Buffaloes.
	The lions are getting ready to run and attack the Buffaloes.
	The angry Buffaloes are running away from the hungry lions.
	The Furious  lions are chasing the baby Buffalo calf away from his family.
	The baby Buffalo is in the dirty water and the lions and crocodile are fighting over the baby buffalo.
	Then the Buffaloes come and save the little baby buffalo using their horns.
	The enormous Buffaloes scared away the lions with their big horns.
	The baby Buffalo is saved by it’s family.

My Learning Goals

Anzac letter

W.A.L.T describe what life was like for men and women in WW1 through a diary entry.