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1) Consequences of technology towards students
2) Effects of teen smartphone addiction
3) How technology changed from the past and the present.
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Technology has changed from the past. Technology has now made teenagers addicted to their cellphones. The human brain isn't fully developed until the age of 25. If a teenager is addicted to their phone then there could be a negative affect on their brain development. Scientists have researched that teenagers that are addicted to their cellphones have similar brains to people who are drugged. Being addicted to your phone can lead to different problem in the future. For instants, you could be addicted to alcohol, drugs, anxiety. In conclusion teenagers should spend more time with their families and less time on their cellphone.
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