Social Studies - Lawyer Paragraph

Are students addicted to their cellphone?If so, is that a problem? (use a lawyer paragraph)

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Key idea.
What must you achieve
In the paragraph I am trying to show/prove/explain that.

Information
Key information you want to include
1) Consequences of technology towards students
2) Effects of teen smartphone addiction
3) How technology changed from the past and the present.

Delivery
Best paragraph structure to convey all this is.

Technology has changed from the past. Technology has now made teenagers addicted to their cellphones. The human brain isn't fully developed until the age of 25. If a teenager is addicted to their phone then there could be a negative affect on their brain development. Scientists have researched that teenagers that are addicted to their cellphones have similar brains to people who are drugged. Being addicted to your phone can lead to different problem in the future. For instants, you could be addicted to alcohol, drugs, anxiety. In conclusion teenagers should spend more time with their families and less time on their cellphone. 

Technology - Social Studies

Lawyer Paragraph

Technology has changed and improved from the past. The improvement of technology from the past and now has helped the community do things faster and better. An example of how technology has changed, is phones. Old phones were hard to use because they take up to 10 hours to change a weight around 1 kg. Now phones are easier to use because it doesn’t take time to call someone and it doesn’t take as long to charge. Another example is how we used to read books. When you want to read a lot of  books it’s very hard to carry. Nowadays people can read books from the comfort of their own homes. Computers have helped us work more easily and can do a lot of things there, like watching movies, videos etc. These examples have impacted our lives for the better.