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Friday, June 10, 2016

Final draft

My worst day ever!
My presentation
W.A.L.T make improvements to my writing and present it to an audience.



It was a normal bright and sunny day in June 17.  I was just walking along the path looking for some food to eat by the lake. I’m going to eat some grass just on the path.

I saw some lions coming towards me ‘oh no’ where is my dad,  I was so horrified I was trying to sprint as quickly as I could away from the pride of lions.
‘Oh no’ they captured  me the pride of lions pull me into the water.  A crocodile came and they had a tug of war. They were pulling me everywhere, but finally they stopped and the lions won. They pulled very hard on me.
 
The lions were so happy, but not for long because the buffalos came back. The buffalos came and scared the lions away so I could be with my family again.

So now the battle has ended I feel so thrilled and relieved that I am back with my family again.

By Genica

Friday, June 3, 2016

My Turtle presentation


My presentation of Turtles