First Draft

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

First draft

The Worst day ever!

It was a normal bright and sunny day in June 17.  I was just walking along the path looking for some food to eat by the lake. I’m just going to eat some grass I am going to go to my dad he has big horns I am a calf with baby horns.  

I saw some lions coming towards me oh no where is my dad I am so scared  I was running away from them. ‘Oh no’ they caught  me the lions dragged me into the water. And the crocodile and the lion having a war.

So now the battle has ended I feel so excited that I am back with my family again.

Genica's Battle at Kruger Sequence

Animal war

	The Buffaloes are walking towards the hidden lions.
	The lions are looking at the Buffaloes.
	The lions are getting ready to run and attack the Buffaloes.
	The angry Buffaloes are running away from the hungry lions.
	The Furious  lions are chasing the baby Buffalo calf away from his family.
	The baby Buffalo is in the dirty water and the lions and crocodile are fighting over the baby buffalo.
	Then the Buffaloes come and save the little baby buffalo using their horns.
	The enormous Buffaloes scared away the lions with their big horns.
	The baby Buffalo is saved by it’s family.

My Learning Goals

Anzac letter

W.A.L.T describe what life was like for men and women in WW1 through a diary entry.